Wednesday, March 28, 2012

common man

This is my first attempt to write in english language.

we are strangers,
though we walk together.
being a part of this crowd,
sharing the same lane.
common man you are,
..and i am the same.

The thoughts we share,
the difficulties we face.
struggling in this so called
life maze,
finding a path for ourselves.
being a part of this crowd,
sharing the same lane.
common man you are,
and i am the same.

The hope and happiness,
despair and sadness.
weighing these all on life scale,
each and every day.
being a part of this crowd,
sharing the same lane.
common man you are,
and i am the same.

6 comments:

  1. being a part of this crowd,
    sharing the same lane.
    common man you are,
    and i am the same.


    I like the whole poem but the last lines are very much impressive.

    Regards.

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  2. कल 31/03/2012 को आपकी यह पोस्ट नयी पुरानी हलचल पर लिंक की जा रही हैं.आपके सुझावों का स्वागत है .
    धन्यवाद!

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  3. Wonderful creation. The common men of the world are the same as they face the same difficulties and problems..Well depicted their feelings..Regards

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  4. A nice poem.Last lines are catching >
    Asha

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  5. facts of life ...beautifully put.

    The hope and happiness,
    despair and sadness.
    weighing these all on life scale,
    each and every day.

    keep it up!!!
    anu

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  6. common man you are,
    and i am the same...
    very true

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